{ well, thankfully she didn't seem to put anything questionable in there, the coast feels clear. }
Very well. { he'll take the chopsticks set aside, lifting the plate with one hand and lifting the meat with the other. carefully, he'll blow on it first before taking his first bite.
he chews, staying quiet for a long moment. honestly it's hard to tell what he thinks right away, it doesn't seem to be a good or bad reaction? it looks like he's taking this very seriously though! }
I see, so this is your take on the dish. I can't say I'm familiar with all the spices you used or this particular style of cooking, but it seems rather fine to me.
{ tasteful??? though??? who knows. } I'm sure your friends will be happy to try it.
{ he's still eating the portion she gave him, so it's obviously okay!!! }
[With that, there was a small frown. Here, she was hoping that there would be more to say but alas. It seems that her cooking was simply average. Giving a sigh, she'll just have to admit that is all she is getting.]
{ unfortunately she's competing with thoma and the traveler's cooking here, it was never going to be exceptional but he does frown in return. }
Was that not enough feedback? I don't remember if I said but I don't generally have the time to cook for myself, so I'm not sure if I could say what would be good to add. If you're willing to let me take some of this-- { he gestures at his own plate } --back with me, I could ask my friend to send you further critique.
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Thoma. { this time he'll actually give her a name, instead of evading. } Though I can't promise he'll make the time, but I can't think of anyone more capable. The Traveler would be my only other thought, I imagine she'd have some ideas of how to improve it, if you were curious. Personally I'm quite happy with it how it is, but I can understand a need to improve. Ayaka has been practicing a lot lately as well.
Ah, that would be because I'm familiar with the Traveler as Lumine, Aether's sister. Apologies for the confusion I'm sure this will bring, but if it helps, Ayaka remembers the same as you do.
I'm not the only one, but it does seem to be a strange split across us all. So far the only conclusion I have is of parallel worlds of a sorts, but nothing is concrete. From what I understand the events don't seem to differ.
I see. Either way, I have yet to meet Lumine but I certainly hope she is just as friendly as Aether! From what I know, I only know of her from her brother.
[And you know. Along with a few other things........]
No. { there's little humour to his face now. } Perhaps once or twice would be a coincidence, but the evidence suggests that all the actions they've both taken have been parallel. I'm aware that sounds rather concerning, but there is another you in a different world who met Lumine in the exact same way. If you don't believe me, feel free to ask her yourself. If the memory she recounts is the same as you remember, I expect a reward.
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Oh? Now I truly an intrigued. I'm rather looking forward to it.
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Now, please. Do eat and tell me what you think. I don't think you'll be disappointed!
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Very well. { he'll take the chopsticks set aside, lifting the plate with one hand and lifting the meat with the other. carefully, he'll blow on it first before taking his first bite.
he chews, staying quiet for a long moment. honestly it's hard to tell what he thinks right away, it doesn't seem to be a good or bad reaction? it looks like he's taking this very seriously though! }
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What will he say? She didn't know but she dared not to say anything in fear of disrupting his train of thought]
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I see, so this is your take on the dish. I can't say I'm familiar with all the spices you used or this particular style of cooking, but it seems rather fine to me.
{ tasteful??? though??? who knows. } I'm sure your friends will be happy to try it.
{ he's still eating the portion she gave him, so it's obviously okay!!! }
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[With that, there was a small frown. Here, she was hoping that there would be more to say but alas. It seems that her cooking was simply average. Giving a sigh, she'll just have to admit that is all she is getting.]
Anything you think I should add in the future?
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Was that not enough feedback? I don't remember if I said but I don't generally have the time to cook for myself, so I'm not sure if I could say what would be good to add. If you're willing to let me take some of this-- { he gestures at his own plate } --back with me, I could ask my friend to send you further critique.
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[After all, she may or may not have more time than usual so she might as well try to figure out how to cook better!]
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[The more she thought about it, the more something didn't seem to make sense with what he said. But when she finally does?]
Why are you referring Aether as a she?
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{ and then he's sighing }
Ah, that would be because I'm familiar with the Traveler as Lumine, Aether's sister. Apologies for the confusion I'm sure this will bring, but if it helps, Ayaka remembers the same as you do.
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[That said.]
I wonder why that is we remember things so differently.
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[And you know. Along with a few other things........]
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{ even if ayato bullies her a little. sometimes. }
Hopefully you'll run into her soon.
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[She said with a giggle once more.]
Wish me luck though. Hopefully I will meet her in a less embarrassing situation!
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[She's keeping her lips sealed]
But yes, I would like to contact her at some point. Although, it will be rather confusing to know I won't know her.
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{ isn't that helpful!!! }
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[HMmMMmmMmmmm??]
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You really are expecting me to feel embarrassed no matter who it is, aren't you?
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[Again, all with a dramatic sigh before shaking her head.]
Regardless, it seems that I will have much to improve on once I figure out how to cook.
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{ does he though?????? }
But everyone has room for improvement nonetheless. If I give you his contact details, feel free to say I suggested him for help.
{ not like he wouldn't help anyway, but ayato's name is certainly going to help }