I see, so this is your take on the dish. I can't say I'm familiar with all the spices you used or this particular style of cooking, but it seems rather fine to me.
{ tasteful??? though??? who knows. } I'm sure your friends will be happy to try it.
{ he's still eating the portion she gave him, so it's obviously okay!!! }
[With that, there was a small frown. Here, she was hoping that there would be more to say but alas. It seems that her cooking was simply average. Giving a sigh, she'll just have to admit that is all she is getting.]
{ unfortunately she's competing with thoma and the traveler's cooking here, it was never going to be exceptional but he does frown in return. }
Was that not enough feedback? I don't remember if I said but I don't generally have the time to cook for myself, so I'm not sure if I could say what would be good to add. If you're willing to let me take some of this-- { he gestures at his own plate } --back with me, I could ask my friend to send you further critique.
Edited ( missed a v important word ksdjgn) 2023-04-22 23:12 (UTC)
Thoma. { this time he'll actually give her a name, instead of evading. } Though I can't promise he'll make the time, but I can't think of anyone more capable. The Traveler would be my only other thought, I imagine she'd have some ideas of how to improve it, if you were curious. Personally I'm quite happy with it how it is, but I can understand a need to improve. Ayaka has been practicing a lot lately as well.
Ah, that would be because I'm familiar with the Traveler as Lumine, Aether's sister. Apologies for the confusion I'm sure this will bring, but if it helps, Ayaka remembers the same as you do.
I'm not the only one, but it does seem to be a strange split across us all. So far the only conclusion I have is of parallel worlds of a sorts, but nothing is concrete. From what I understand the events don't seem to differ.
I see. Either way, I have yet to meet Lumine but I certainly hope she is just as friendly as Aether! From what I know, I only know of her from her brother.
[And you know. Along with a few other things........]
No. { there's little humour to his face now. } Perhaps once or twice would be a coincidence, but the evidence suggests that all the actions they've both taken have been parallel. I'm aware that sounds rather concerning, but there is another you in a different world who met Lumine in the exact same way. If you don't believe me, feel free to ask her yourself. If the memory she recounts is the same as you remember, I expect a reward.
I talked with the stable owner I work for. He said lending horses for both horse riding lessons and expeditions is doable and that he'll be in touch with the other stable owners around to give a hand too.
Apparently they have an organization or something. The more you know.
Considering horse riding lessons carries no risk, that is quite reasonable of them. However, I would have thought they'd expect a charge as a minimum for any loaned for expeditions? Unless I misunderstood?
That's also one of the things he'll talk with the others about. How much is fair to charge. Cause he definitely thinks that it should cost something due to the risks.
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